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Subject: better grammar in telnet error message
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>Number:         939
>Category:       krb5-appl
>Synopsis:       better grammar in telnet error message
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    raeburn
>State:          feedback
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   unknown
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Apr  9 23:59:01 EDT 2001
>Last-Modified:  Tue May  1 18:40:29 EDT 2001
>Originator:     Garry Zacheiss
>Organization:
Garry Zacheiss
>Release:        krb5-1.1.1
>Environment:
	
System: SunOS sweet-transvestite.mit.edu 5.7 Generic_106541-09 sun4u sparc SUNW,Ultra-5_10
Architecture: sun4

>Description:
	The error message:

	"Authentication negotiation has failed, which is required for 
	encryption."

	is poorly phrased; it makes it sound like the failure of
	authentication negotiation is required for encryption.
>How-To-Repeat:
	Telnet someplace and lose.
	
>Fix:
	Apply this patch.

--- telnet.c    Mon Apr  9 23:54:45 2001
+++ telnet.c.new        Mon Apr  9 23:46:26 2001
@@ -2317,8 +2317,8 @@
                Exit(1);
            }
            if (auth_has_failed) {
-               printf("\nAuthentication negotation has failed, which is required for\n");
-               printf("encryption.  Good bye.\n\r");
+               printf("\nNegotiation of authentication, which is required for encryption,\n");
+               printf("has failed.  Good bye.\n\r");
                Exit(1);
            }
            if (my_want_state_is_dont(TELOPT_ENCRYPT) ||

>Audit-Trail:

Responsible-Changed-From-To: krb5-unassigned->raeburn
Responsible-Changed-By: raeburn
Responsible-Changed-When: Tue May  1 18:31:23 2001
Responsible-Changed-Why:

I'll take it...

State-Changed-From-To: open-feedback
State-Changed-By: raeburn
State-Changed-When: Tue May  1 18:39:42 2001
State-Changed-Why:

A variation of this patch ("good-bye" should be hyphenated, according
to webster) will be in the 1.3 release.

>Unformatted: